I'm Dead Tears

by Loveless Dreamer   Aug 15, 2009


As I lay down in bed,

Thinking about what you said.

I'm sorry i have to do this,

But can you give me one last kiss.

I had cried,

When I died.

I wish i hadn't started,

But i'm really broken-hearted.

If you love me,

You should see.

I have no purpose in life,

And I grab my knife.

Tonight I'll die,

With tears in my eyes.

In the tub there is a flood,

And tinted red with all my blood.

Tonight I cried,

Also tonight I lied.

I said I was with glee,

Now look at me.

I'm dead and sad,

But no one can replace a person who's mad.

I'm sorry everyone, But this is what I had to do,

There are tears in your eyes as I look at you.

I love you,

And you had so may clues.

The damage I would cause,

The things I would do.

I hope you're not mad,

But I don't want you to be sad,

At least I was glad.

That I had someone like you.

You cared about my life,

But you left me alone with my knife.

You need to hear,

That I loved you dear.

I'm dead in tears,

But now you know, it was years.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Sadespair

    I loved it.
    I agree with Ben.
    Though might I add that
    When you wrote
    "you had so many clues
    The damage I would cause
    The things I would do"

    Was a great line to me(:

  • 14 years ago

    by Em

    Wow so deep and emotional. 5/5, Em x

  • 14 years ago

    by Kuro

    A very tragic and sorrowful feeling poem. writing depressing poetry always makes me feel better. i hope that this, at least, made you feel better than before you wrote it.

    also... i just wanted to comment on this part of the poem:
    "I love you,
    And you had so may clues.
    The damage I would cause,
    The things I would do.
    I hope you're not mad,
    But I don't want you to be sad,
    At least I was glad.
    That I had someone like you."

    ^ all threw-out the poem you had a nice rhym scheme with each 2 lines rhyme. but with these lines you dropped your rhyming scheme but then continued it after. you might have did it unintentiionally, i'm not saying it wasn't good... but it was a bid odd.

    keep up the good work
    ~Ben

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