Black Lake

by isabel   Aug 17, 2009


Inky darkness, no reflection,
Still as death,
No birds fly over and no life under it
Lives have been taken lives have been cursed
drowning is terrible but looking is worse
Here is my warning dont go near otherwise your life will end in fear.

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  • 15 years ago

    by mandy

    That was very eerie! You painted a wonderful picture; I was on edge!

    Your title was a little boring, though. Next time you write a poem try coming up with somthing a little more original. This helps to capture the readers attention.

    The flow and format were both blended well to create a sturing mood. Great write!

    mandy :)

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