The Rotten Apple

by KomBAT Kitten   Aug 23, 2009


An endless rain upon my head
The screaming and shouting
I wish i was dead

My dreams of my future
Being at the top
People would see me
Look down, and then walk

I'm alone on the ground
So useless and dead
Rotting so slowly
From feelings unsaid

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  • 16 years ago

    by Love Panda

    Are you miossing a line from the 1st stanza? its the only one to only have three lines.

    the flow was great, by saying as little as possible you said alot, gets the reader to think about things in more depth. your wording is great. i loved it.

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