Saying # 71

by Christopher Wry   Aug 23, 2009


Half a loaf
is better than none
depends
on how many you
have
to feed be
that not so

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  • 14 years ago

    by Ingrid

    An explanation underneath the poem about the format would be a nice addition.

    The wording is simple and I think this is what is best for a format such as this. Good wording also, although beggars can't be chosers, eh? When one loaf is all you have, you have to make do with it.

    Well done,

    5/5 Ingrid

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