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by Zuri   Aug 23, 2009


Sometimes I walk alone and I stop and look around me.
I see people in cars, I see people that pass by, I see...people.
And I wonder how many of those people walk around life with the memory of a broken heart.
I wonder if right now they're thinking of their lost love...even if it was five or ten years ago.
Or those that haven't found someone to love yet, are they happy?

Which one is suffering more?

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  • 16 years ago

    by Spirit

    I really like the idea that you had for this poem. I would like to see what you can add to it. What can you do to make the reader question themselves even more?

    Don't get the wrong idea. When I say add to it I don't mean make it 30 verses long. I like the bluntness of it but try taking it up a notch.

    It's just a thought.

    Thanks for the read.
    >-Spirit-->

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