Nice. I really liked how you went about writing this poem. The repition was great and the last stanza was a punch in the gut. It was like, heyyyy that changed to sorrow realllly quick. Very good. I love the emphasis you put on nothingness. 5/5

Very well written. I loved this part:
Just pretty words
falling from fragile hands

Great poem.love ur work. :)))

I usually don't like many poems the dont ryme
but yours spoke to me... it was amazing

my favorite
"I paint a picture that has no color...
no shapes no lines.
Just long strokes
running from rusty brushes"

I also liked how you used "muse-less" sounds so close to "useless" yet "muse-less" went so well w/everything you written

Great Job!

stay writing forever
5/5

The repetition was great in this write I must agree on that. I think that you did a nice job here, it wasn't boring and I like how you described your emotions in more ways than one; each stanza was something different than the previous one. You did a great job on this. Not much more I can say. Thanks for participating in my contest. Well done.

You've got the art for poetry. Great poem! love the way you set it out word for word. Cant really choose a favourite line!

Im not sure what it means but it flowed well nice repitition. l8er

I was going to write a poem about a lack of a muse. Kind of a shame when you read a poem that you wanted to write and were like DARNIT they did it so well. This is a great poem, the metaphors and the repetition are quite fantastic.

I like the images portrayed with your words, except for the last verse and that is too sad. The flow is excellent, words rolling off the tongue without stumbling over them. Well done.

That was an amazing poem.

The first stanza was my favorite! A new meaning to emotions on page.
Brava!

This peice was well done. -ENE-

This was amazing :) It portrayed really strong emotion. I loved how it suddenly turned in the last stanza to show the sadness resulting from this nothingness. Was a really beautiful poem :) you are really talented. Well done.

5/5 for suree

I really liked this. the concept i could really grasp and identify with. i think i might favorite this. 5/5 for sure.

thanks for sharing
~Ben

I absolutely loved it; love the creativity and style. Keep it up!