No One Left

by Second to None   Sep 2, 2009


First dad now you
Do either of you remember us
You have two daughters
One in middle school
And one in high

Dad has been gone for years
And mom, you where always there
But now your states away
And we're forced to make it alone

Forced to pull through school
And find ways to get around
Dad can't see us
And you choose not to

I can't believe no ones noticed
Two kids living alone side by side
Finding ways to get by
No one will realize cause theres no one left

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  • 14 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    This made me so sad...I can't even explain. Your words were so simple but the story behind them made me want to cry, that's how powerful this story was. The way you describe the scene with you and your sister is so heart wrenching, I literally wanted to give you both hugs. I know you probably aren't looking for sympathy but this really made me sad. I'm here for ya if you ever need someone to talk to. Keep writing deary. Nik :)

  • 14 years ago

    by unknown

    It's simple, yet powerful, isn't it?
    Well, if it's based on true story then i think it's kinda sad.
    Not a good example of mom.. ;[
    Uh,, sorry can't give you a good comment. =[

    No matter what's in your mind right now, there's someone who's always watching over you and you sister. It's Him. =]