What a unique idea to write about depression blinding you and the emotions written in braille. It worked very well. Depression is full of ups and downs, happy one minute, sad the next. Good job.

A very unique idea Temps, it drew me in completely. What I liked about this piece was the meaning and emotion, it just brought so much into the reader's mind. Excellent work, keep it up!

~MaryAnne

I agree with Mouris. You're a surprise in every poem.

This was written beautifully, Temps...

You indeed grow in your work!

It also reminded me of Hannah, I will never forget that girl, one of a kind, she was...

Well done girlie:)

*hugs*

5/5 Ingrid

I like the idea of depression making you blind
its something different and a new way to look
at it. Hope you will be okay..take care.

Temps
Great job on a very unique piece.
Take Care
Cindy

I like how your last line of your first stanza and the last line of your last stanza both said "in the end" I don't know if you did that on purpose but I liked it. This was a very well written poem. The diction wasn't as difficult as some of your other poems but I think that's good. This was a simple poem and that made me like it even more. Great work honey :) Nik

A very unique write... so well written and expressed . I Loved it! How you used braille to describe depression blinding us. Excellent job :)

Olwin.

I really enjoyed this poem, it was written so well and you expressed so much emotion.
Great Job

I really like the way you went with this piece Temps, comparing an unfamiliar emotion with something like braille, which truly many of us would not know. A very unique comparison to me. I also enjoy the hopeful ending, too many don't see that when they are strapped down by depression. I think you have penned something many can relate to, nice work.

A thoughtful poem,which reminds us that sometimes,we do not necessarily have control over everything,however,hope is always an option.
5/5 no doubt.