Comments : Pomeranians. [7/5 Trochee]

  • 14 years ago

    by Cindy

    Temps what a happy picture this brings to the mind. Great job on the form challenge.
    Take Care
    Cindy

  • 14 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Ha ha, I remember this from our convo's :)

    Indeed, such happy little creatures and so beautiful!

    You did well on this, Temps. Very original and a joy to read:)

    *hugs*

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 14 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    I love pomeranians :) they are so fluffy and furry :) ... well described ... beautifully penned...
    haven't tried this form yet... thinking of doing it :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    I had a Pomeranian and he indeed was always bouncing around, full of excitement. Thanks for reminding me of Jojo. Well done.

  • 14 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Good work :) you worry too much. You're an amazing writer, trust your gut. Keep it up hun. Nik

  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    A lovely sight of a winner with full of smiles.
    Well done with the form..good write :)

  • 14 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    I know I read this and thought I had commented on it . Guess not. I liked how you made this a fun little poem. Funny how little dogs have so much heart.
    Very enjoyable

  • 14 years ago

    by Perfection

    Wow

    You are a true poet temps. Id give you a nicer comment but I dont rly know what to say about this more than it is very well written.

    I am happy to see you writing

    Never stop

  • 14 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Thank you for posting this lovely and uplifting piece, it brought a smile onto my face. I love dogs and this type especially, thanks for capturing that joy they hold and the happiness they share. 5/5 from me, beautiful job as always.

    ~MaryAnne

  • 14 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    I haven't seen this form before so this was a treat. Realistic, picture painting imagery. I could imagine myself at the dog show. Nice job!