You Never
by Patricia Sep 7, 2009
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You never showed me rainbows on the days that it would rain, you were never there to give a damn how much you broke my heart, you never cared to help pick up the peices everytime i fell apart, you never took the time to know all the hurt and pain that i rather not show, you never have the time to realize how much ive had to pay for the day that you gave birth to me i wasnt something that you were sappose to give away. |
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16 years ago
This is very sad, its expressive but feels incomplete, like there is more you could say. Again the lay out makes it a difficult read, if you spaced it better the poem would have more of a rhythm to it.
