by Second to None Sep 7, 2009
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
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I have a story for every mark |
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I really like this poem. The rhyme and flow is excellent. The ending was really good to tie it all in and include the title. Great expression! Keep it up, I love your writings! |
by Lady Nik
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This one was okay. You said "I have" alot and that made it kind of annoying. This wasn't my favorite form you, but it still good. Keep it up. Nik |
by + Alana
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That really good, simple but good, never a good thing but least you can express yourself |