Title of Player

Oopsies! that last comment was to the wrong person!

well great job on this jigglypuff! :]

A beautifully written poem with perfect rhyme and flow! I can definitely relate, after just reading that poem my mind instantly thought of the people I tend to open up to and I cannot deny a chill did run up my spine.

Great job!

5/5

Write on!

This poem is much like your last but it does not pack the punch as the last stanza lets it down, it has no meter and seems out of place if you edit it correctly your poem could be excellent.
4/5 Ray S

I never told you to lie to me,
Or to say that I was your only one,
You said it of your own accord,
Did you think you'd get an award?

*True in so many relationships... this shouldnt be said if they're not meant.*

If that's what you want it's yours,
The title of player goes only to you,
My friends said you were a user,
Now I see you as just another loser.

*I thought this part was funny, i really like how its written!*

Go away and never come home,
I don't want to see your mug again,
Walk out that door and don't look back,
Your bags have already been packed.

*Sad and yet humorous. Again true in so many ways.*

**Overall, written well, the flow went nicely, and there was a lot of emotion sqeezed in a short, yet powerful piece. Great job**