Comments : Mask

  • 14 years ago

    by Saving Grace

    Woah. Verrry relatable piece. Easy to understand. I actually reallly liked this poem, its simple, but discriptive. Keep it up. 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Hollow Emotion

    I like how this was written, it flowed perfectly and i could see the imangery in the words. but is the last sentance supposed to say "doing so doing so well" maybe just "doing so well" would make the last stanza flow better

  • 14 years ago

    by divine divinity

    Excellent poem. Short yet says a lot, speaks of so much in so little words, well written, beautiful real emotion in every word.

  • 14 years ago

    by kelleyana

    This is unique, i love it. Very well done, 5/5, kel.

  • 14 years ago

    by victoria

    I understand this completely. wearing a mask just to get through the day. love how short it is but yet it tells so much more.
    wonderful!

    victoria