Still Fighting

by She Loves Me She Loves Me Not   Sep 15, 2009


I don't know whether to laugh or cry,
I don't know whether to live or die,
Feelings so mixed I'm so confused,
Thoughts so complex I'm so bemused.

I need someone to show me the way,
and help me through my disarray,
Inside my head is one big mess,
Punished by fears that I possess.

My Happiness overshadowed by pain,
Still my life is something I want to retain,
Don't ask me why, I really don't know,
I'll fight it through and go with the flow.

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  • 16 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Really nice flow and tone .
    I think each of us has gotten to the point of giving up yet we keep going.
    good write enjoyable read

  • 16 years ago

    by XxLastHopexX

    This is a beautiful poem....flowing with sadness...but at least its flowing....just beautiful...keep fighting...keep writing.

  • 16 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    An excellent piece. Very well written and expressed. Great rhyming and flow throughout . You are quite a writer! I love your poems, and how you write them :) Awesome job.

  • 16 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Nice poem honey :) Makes me happy to see you writing more. I heart you Nik

  • 16 years ago

    by nikki

    I feel the same way somethimes! its not easy

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