Comments : There for you

  • 8 years ago

    by marina14

    I think this is you're best its very good I can see the emotion you put into it ):

  • 1 year ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Unrequited love is always painful and never resolved. You have captured the emotional depth well here. The first stanza really sets the scene well for the reader to understand the character a young man who is desperate to get noticed by the person he loves but doesn't know how to go about it resulting in a spiralling descent into emotional defeat. Best wishes Milly x

    • 1 year ago

      by chelo

      I appreciate your comments Milly. I remember I wrote this poem with tears in my eyes...Thanks again!