Cindy, this is dark. Gave me shivers while reading it. The pain comes through loud and clear in your words. Well done.

I've read this about 4 times . Each time I begin to comment and get lost in what to say. It's a fantastic work of poetry yet the words eat at me somehow.
Gives me such a feeling of doom it's hard to shake
A powerful poem Cindy
Love ya

I felt like I was covered by darkness and
sucked into its grave. I like the images each
verse painted...touching. Take care

Now this is what i call dark. This was awesome...chilling indeed.
Glad that i read it in daytime... :)

Dark Black words with beautiful imagination...unique.

loved it

all the best and take care

How deep and dark this is...wow. Awesome word choice, it really deepened the mood quite a bit..sends shivers down the spine. Great work .. lets put up some love happy poems now .. ok? :] Take care. Love ya :]

Cold and spooky, like death. A perfect Halloween poem. "Wreak", not "reek" though :-)

Oh my dear Cindy. This poem is so dark, it gave me chills. It is magnificent and horrifying. The last stanza is great. Your word choice was just perfect. I miss you, dear, and hope this comment finds you well.

This one really captured the terror of nightmares really well.How it ended was really sad how the figure decided to embrace death instead of face them. It very well written i thought. 5/5

~xcoryx~

Coming back to the site after a long while, I somehow knew that I would be reading a masterpiece from you.But was not prepared for this very dark and chilling piece.It is both dark and sad but awesomely penned.