Comments : Courage to Pursue.

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    We all control are dreams and it does take courage to pursue those dreams. At times they seem just out of reach but if we keep after them, we can reach them. Well done.

  • 14 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Aspirations painted
    from a wide array of wishes are
    not as far as they seem;

    *I loved this part. I think this was a very lovely read Temps. Your message is so true and I think alot of people need to read this. I've been feeling kinda down lately but this poem makes me feel so much better. It lets me know that my dreams are never too far away. I think you've got another winner on your hands. Keep it up hun. Beautiful work. Nik*

  • 14 years ago

    by Ingrid

    You wrote this down really well, Temps.

    The thing with dreams is, you have to take action and not just let it come over you.
    If you want something, make a plan of how to obtain it and work towards your goal(s) slowly but surely and erase the word "failure"from your dictionary.
    If you really want something, then you should go for it with all you've got.

    God bless:)

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 14 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Nice poem, takes us to where we should be mentally. Nothing is impossible and dreams do come true. Enjoyed it much :-)

  • 14 years ago

    by Countess of Monte Cristo

    Loved it. loved it. loved it. we must have the courage to pursue our dreams. 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Lovely and striking read, just what some of us in the world need today. Well-chosen display of words and feeling, you penned yet another thought-provoking and inspiring write.

    5/5 from me, good work!

    God bless you.

    ~MaryAnne

  • 14 years ago

    by effervescence

    Fantastic! This poem is full of feeling and impacts the reader. Greatly inspiring and well written.

    5/5
    Athena

  • 14 years ago

    by Nee

    I love the quote :)
    your poem is beautiful Temps..it is so motivating to people and inspiring to poets.
    I love how you rhymed the last three lines in the second stanza, it seemed so spontaneous and natural.

    I could actually use some inspiration from quotes, thank you for the reminder!
    Well done!
    Write on~

  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    How true your words are. You must have the
    courage and strength to pursue your dreams.
    I liked this poem from start to finish!