What they didnt know.

by J u l e s   Sep 28, 2009


What they didnt see
was the love we had
What they didnt know
now we can not reach

We were so inspired
by what others didnt realize
Now left in the dust
with a broken down melody

I cant tell you that we lasted
I cant tell you we survived
We had what we wanted
but now its a need

They took you away
and now i cannot breathe
because you were what kept me
sane
breathing
safe
protected

without you now...

my days
feel
lost
and
broken.

[ technically not counted as a poem and not really caring what people think of it. this doesnt explain the exact pain i feel but i had the most important person taken away from me and now im lost with nothing left because i dont know what to do anymore ]

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  • 14 years ago

    by iLYSSA

    I gave you a 5, but you deserve a 10. i know a lot of people go around on this site, rating people's feelings. but just cause you said that it doesnt matter what people think, then i applaud you for that. you feel whatever you feel and no one should rate you on that. i understand that it may be even hard to describe with words but you're not alone, even if you may feel like it. i dont normally do this, but if you ever wanna chit chat about it or anything, you can always message me.

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