Goodbye

by Loveless Dreamer   Oct 11, 2009


It's obvious that you never loved me,
it's obvious that you never cared.
Doesn't it matter that I worry about you?
Doesn't it matter that I'm so scared?
I read your newest poem,
and thank you, it hurt so bad.
You make me feel like I want to die,
I hope this makes you glad.
I found my pretty little razor,
now I'm pressing it to my skin.
Can you see the blood falling down?
I think I can almost see you grin.
I won't be at school tomorrow,
I won't be at school today.
You don't have to put up with me anymore,
goodbye, is the last word I'll say.

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  • 14 years ago

    by David johnson

    This is a great poem 5/5 it comes from the heart and i can feel the hurt when i read the words i have been there i know what its like to be there but u cnt let others control u that used to sound like a bunch of BS to me also but read this poem of mine i think it will give u some inspiration

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  • 14 years ago

    by Aaron

    Nice symmetry. flows really smooth

  • 14 years ago

    by Loveless Dreamer

    Well thank you. :)

  • 14 years ago

    by ShyandHurt

    Way to go =) That was an awesome poem that was pretty easy for me to relate to.

    And I think it's an awesome poem and it's close to perfect, if not already!

    5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Freedom

    I loved this poem :) pls keep writing

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