Comments : Darkness Descends

  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    I felt like I pulled into a sinister world of
    hauntings that leaves the person tattered..
    well done!

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Cindy, this is a dark one. Made me have goosebumps. (smiles) You captured the essence of darkness descending on a soul. Well done.

  • 14 years ago

    by Corinne

    This is EXCELLENT Cindy.
    Thank you for commenting on my song. I'm so glad you listened - and continue to listen to my music.

  • 14 years ago

    by Daisy if you do

    You definitely have a grip on dark poetry. Wonderfully done. I could feel the hairs raising on my neck

  • 14 years ago

    by Daisy if you do

    Sorry I wasn't done before I hit submit.

    There is lots of evil that we can relate to in this world and you wrote this just in time for Halloween. What a spooky write. Great Job!

    Love you,
    Kay

  • 14 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Woah...this one really made me stand on my toes. What a great scary piece. Just like your love poems take me to a sweet fairy land...your dark poems take me places i would rather not mention... :)

    You should have mentioned along with the title (Not for people with weak hearts)

    Loved it

    all the best and take care

  • 14 years ago

    by Emotiionsz

    Ooooooooohh the LAST VERSE WAS AMAZING!!!

    beautiful technique in writing your words just keep luring me in! I loved it!

  • 14 years ago

    by Mr Rhee

    I must say, this was a very fun piece to read. All the suffering for all that time, darkness would be a relief from the torment. Almost, as though, the the long, hard torture is coming to an end, of a sort. I think you hit some of those pains right on. Thank you.