Drown

by Skyfire   Oct 16, 2009


....such cold warmth
air rising
I couldn't remember
the last thing I said to you.
My memories are melting
into waves--soft and
liquid
clouds floating murkily
above the blue...
the sky a wavy reflection
I think your hand is in mine
but my skin is slippery--
or was it you at all?
I've lost your face,
I cannot remember
why my fingers are so
transparent
or why there is seaweed
in my sky.....

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  • 14 years ago

    by Kurt

    That was some powerful imagery about drowning. The descriptions you provided throughout the poem really allow the reader to paint a picture in their mind about what the character must be experiencing. This is very well written. 5/5.

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