Wow. 5/5
amazing poem, there was a lot of feeling
and so many things i want to do now!!!
keep em coming

Today I awoke to the sun rising off the shore of Thailand,

*For some reason "awoke" sounds weird to me. I'd maybe say "woke up to" or something like that.*

Sat on the arch of a beautiful rainbow, viewed all its hues.

*This line is flawless. I love how you descibe the rainbow as well as all the places you have been. Makes this poem very personal. :)*

Yet nothing in the world compares to you, my home.

*I love how simple this line was, but also how important your words are. The words "My home" really make this line stand out to me. It lets me know that no matter how amazing these other places are, you will still come back home. That's beautiful*

Laid on top of Mount Everest, counted endless shining stars

*I like this line but I would change the word "counted" you used it before. Maybe "watching endless shinning stars" or "admiring endless shinning stars" something like that*

I reached for the sky at the top of the Golden Gate bridge,

*Wonderful line. I can just amaze this perfectly. You are really good with imagery. i love it ;) *

Most of these places I've never been to, only in my dreams,

*I'd change the second part if this to "except for in my dreams" that seems to flow better to me.*

But whenever I look into your beautiful brown eyes.....
I see the world.

*Omg...this line is perfect. That's like the sweetest thing EVER!!! I loved. perfect way to wrap up a lovely poem. My heart is all fuzzy inside now lol. This was a really strong poem and your words are so amazing. I really enjoyed this read. Keep it up hun. Nik*

The flow is flawless and the imagery is beautiful and the romantic twist at the end blew me away

This poem was a great work of art in poetry sense and I would say beautiful as well. The flow in the poem was very good and the rhyming was constant throughout and the imagery was good too. All in all the poem was good and I couldn't see any flaws with it but I will give you a 5/5 for the great work. Keep on writing you really have a great talent.

I'm in total awe of this poem...I LOVE poems that create a story and make me picture it, or state an image and I can see it...This poem was incredible because of that. Every time you names a new lpace my mind jumped to that image. It was awesome :)

I'm glad I read this. I'd like to start reading more of your work!

It seemed it dragged on a bit in the middle...dont get me wrong i loved it....exspecially the end.....good detail.....flow was iffy but over all it deserves a 5/5
good job!

I loved this poem as it describes how much love of someone can colour and brighten your world in so many different ways. I enjoyed the ride and the way it was put together and especially the qualifier at its end 5/5

I loved this poem as it describes how much love of someone can colour and brighten your world in so many different ways. I enjoyed the ride and the way it was put together and especially the qualifier at its end 5/5

THe song Nothing Compares To You comes to mind when reading this beautiful piece. Excellent imagery and I love the ending. I am sure whoever inspired this piece will be touched by this. Great job!

Lovely, just Lovely xP

Wow the first three stanzas raced through my mind to be ohnest such flow. Your ending though was when everything slowed down and had the biggest impact on me truly nice work.

Wow! This is a really good poem. I enjoyed reading it very much. I think you did a wonderful job on it. Keep on writing! 5/5