Crazy as the mind gets

by Someone   Oct 22, 2009


Whispered words of a secretive nature,
what can be said?
Or heard?

I LOVE YOU
Open your mind to a g r o w i n g world.
No longer kept by lock and key
but a ribbon and a bow tie.

Secrets that are told,
I LOVE YOU
Secrets can be a lie.

Eventually lost in a swarm of thoughts
It was better that way.
Never forget

Forget what?
I LOVE YOU

But secrets are always a lie
Made up so the holder of lock and key will feel like,
They are S P E C I A L to you.

Are they?
No.

Smiles are better left reflected
What does that mean?
I LOVE YOU
Nothing.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Ingrid

    I liked both the title and the poem very much, you made it into an interesting poem, both due to the format you created, but also the wording..very thought provoking..all in all a very clever read:)

    But secrets are always a lie
    Made up so the holder of lock and key will feel like,
    They are S P E C I A L to you.

    ^^^
    Are they always a lie...mmhh..I am not sure..it is good you make your reader think.

    The use of capitalised words with spaces in between is also a bonus, it adds to the impact of your words greatly.

    God bless,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 14 years ago

    by Loveless Dreamer

    I loved this one. i liked the way it seemed as though it was all a lie/secret. it made me feel as if you were talking to me. very nice. this goes to my faves. 5/5

    *Val

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