Great write!! emotion and caring...love it!!!keep up the good work my friend :P
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~KiKi

A lot of feeling went into this well written poem. Your romantic desire and caring was delivered well

Well this was certainly a nive write and I would have to say to you in this situation that some people are not willing to just jumb right out of thier boundaries and go with you even with a helping hand and love. As my friend I know alot about you but still whoever this is to remember this well. You will have to gain and persons trust and friendship before they will come and open up to you. And for them being always sad just try to cheer them up it doesn't have to be big or small just a little something here and there and tell them you iwll always ne there for them and help them when they are ready. This is all i have to say. Heed it or not matters to me but that is some of my advice for you.

D'awe
that was really beautifully sweet <3