Autumn Walk

by Of Sweet Insanity   Nov 1, 2009


The blue-grey sky sighs autumn to me
Inhale a deep breath, exhale serenity.
The air so fresh, stroll with no pace.
Sweet, cheery eyes sparkle bright from your face.

Hand in your hand, we walk past our tree
It's all technicolor, orange and red leaves.
Stop by the water, stretching up on my toes
I kiss your lips and then you tap my nose.

Giggle aloud, watch the birds fly away
I turn to you, you've got something to say?
I gaze in your eyes, deep pools of love.
You kneel to your knee and carefully look up.

I gasp to myself, my heart goes insane.
You pull out a box, then my mind goes blank.
"Maria," you say, "will you be my wife?"
I can't find the words so I nod, then cry.

You smile at me, take out the ring.
And I do believe it's like nothing I've seen.
Beautiful silver with a perfect white stone.
Faces and corners, the diamond I'll own.

I offer my hand, which you take with a smile.
You slide on my ring, my heart jumps a mile.
Laughing together, I just know you're the one.
My tears of joy are erased with your thumb.

You hold me so gentle I forget how to breathe.
"Maria... I love you". I know you love me.
Life awaits us, things we're yet to share,
Nothing is like what I'm feeling right here.

Wearing this ring makes my hand weigh a ton.
Reminding me forever of my one and true love.
There's nothing more that I could've dreamt for,
The future so forgien, I can't wait to explore.

And we walk to the sun, getting pink in the sky,
I'll never stop feeling such happiness inside.
We exit the park with a glow fresh in bloom,
Down Main street we walk, the day ending too soon.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Kuro

    Oh, i saw this

    I offer my hand,� which you take with a smile.

    ^weird symbol thingy

  • 14 years ago

    by Kuro

    *awe struck* this was stupendous. *takes notes* i like how you described nature and how everything happened. every stanza rhymed and had good rhythm. the emotions expressed were so clear. its like i was there. this is really touching and deffinately deserves a 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Em

    My goodness this is beautiful. I'm dreaming of the day it happens to me lol. This is beautiful, well written. 5/5 from me, Em.

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