What a wonderful place you have painted with your words :)
Good job!
Take care
Cindy

This is a masterpiece and I am going to nominate it for the weekly contest

A dream or heaven Eh!
I really enjoyed this fresh breath of an air if you will pardon the pun, it took me on your incredible journey as usual yet another piece of your great poetry, with an easy meter and well balanced flow, glad you didn't make to dream like as it would have lost it for me. I would of preferred the Black stallion I use to ride in my youth called Trampus, perhaps one day I will write a story about him I still have several of his bite scars ha! ha! See you got me thinking an excellent poem 5/5 and a vote for this weeks competition. Ray S

Understood about the "ands." I've considered a few changes. I was wondering if anyone else felt the same. I think I'll keep a few of those other items in though. Still, thank you for confirming my thoughts. Greatly appreciated.