So soothing. Beautiful.

Wow, I love love this piece! It may look simple but certainly carries along with it a fantastic imagery. Nice work and keep writing! :D

MY....u have seriously impressed me, I did not expect to read sucha gift-ful piece to be honest but ur so talented...

u have the beauty of old poetry.. know wat i mean with that ?

i mean poetry that is soothing with its amazing images and deep expressions.. which u used in a high quality here.

Soar beyond dear meadow
Reach the clouds so bright
Leave a kiss to the sunset
And bring a glorious sight

>> this is so poetic..and words are
worded in a real harmony
i loved the joy i felt here..thnx :)

Play with the little birds
Singing their lullaby
Calm yourself beside me
And catch a butterfly
>> how joyful...soothing...comfy these
words make u feel...really this is kinda
relaxing..i just love it

Now, my dear meadow
You may rest for a while
But tomorrow is another day
For us to laugh and smile

>> yes so true..u ended it perfectly..

this poem deserves a deep and yet deeper comment..but i tried to be as brief as i can not to bore u ...yet couldnt just not comment with less sense..

thnx for sharing
ur gifted

5/5

I felt like i was swaying in the breeze as i read this. such a calming and descriptive piece! well done

What a lovely piece you have penned.

Play with the little birds
Singing their lullaby
Calm yourself beside me
And catch a butterfly

such soothing words. reads like a lullaby

Now, my dear meadow
You may rest for a while
But tomorrow is another day
For us to laugh and smile

I really liked your ending. promises of more happy days to come.
Great job!
Take Care
Cindy

Your poem is of deep harmony! Your words flow beautifully and with such grace they fly into you like a serene wind, oh my, what a piece!!!!! 5/5

This was soooo sweet and gentle, you will probably never know how much I needed to be reminded of why I am here at this particular moment in time.

Turn to me my dear friend
Stretch your leaves so green
Your purest drops from heaven
Were obvious yet unseen
^^
Beautiful wording in this part, my fav. stanza:)

Good job, dear girl:)

5/5 Ingrid