Comments : Suicide ?

  • 14 years ago

    by kylexthexmagnificent

    Awww this is sad and dark, but i like it :D great write, you have potential

  • 14 years ago

    by FindingHarmonyInYurCries

    Honey,
    There is no such thing as beauty in suicide __

    Well written;
    5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Lynn Anderson

    I really hope that you don't feel this way.. But this poem has a good use of rhyme and words. :) Good work!

  • 14 years ago

    by SheenaMarie

    Dark write very good 5/5