Okay, Nik, I'm ready for a cup of nice hot coffee now. Made me love coffee even more reading this. Well done.

Never seen this done before--loved this although I despise coffee lol... the smell of it is absolutely wonderful though. Awesome job..

Light brown sweetness
cream married to sugar
lips wrap tightly around a cup

I like this verse. In my mind I could picture
the passion like lovers..very nice!
Well done with this form too!

You've created a very soothing vision and feeling about my favorite 'morning medicine' here. Would like to read this as I sip my next cup.

Wonderfully written piece about coffee. 5/5, Em

Ha. I dont even like coffee and your write makes me want a sip or two :] The way you described <coffee> was amazing. I've never seen it done before! But also, the format was perfect and also:

--cream married to sugar --

^^my favorite line. All your work(s) are great. And this here is no exception. Very good write. 5/5

Coffee is the best drink ever. Period. :] Just has to throw that in there.

I dont drink coffe but this poem made me want some. I like the way you described coffe in this poem

I love it

I love coffee though not in the mornings because they make my tummy hot and its something i don't like. but this poem, as a coffee drinker, no matter when, is very beautiful...and yes it makes me want a cup after the very first read.coffee please!