Lazy Gray Days (Haikus)

by LadyPearl   Dec 14, 2009


Days gray with plump clouds
Silence guards the atmosphere
Sleep jails the timid

Alarms are broken
Beds dent by weight of humans
Lost in foggy dreams

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  • 10 years ago

    by KJ

    Very interesting. It was quite short I must say. But the imagery was definately there. I just think you could have done much better with the length so it could have some sort of flow.

    --Sleep jails the timid--
    ^^my favorite line

    Overall, good write. But it could be better. So I gave it a 4/5.