Lazy Gray Days (Haikus)
by LadyPearl Dec 14, 2009
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Days gray with plump clouds |
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14 years ago
by KJ
Very interesting. It was quite short I must say. But the imagery was definately there. I just think you could have done much better with the length so it could have some sort of flow.
--Sleep jails the timid--
^^my favorite line
Overall, good write. But it could be better. So I gave it a 4/5.
