Your Back From Basic

by Good Enough   Dec 22, 2009


Today was amazing
With that simple knock
That you tapped on my door
I wasn't expecting this
For you to be standing there
Your back from basic!

You have be gone
For a long eight weeks

Baby, I missed you
Did you miss me?

And when the rain started
I knew that it was right
And we kissed and we hugged
I've missed you so much

What happened to us?
Who cares, your back
And what we have has lasted
For so many years now

But it sucks that your leaving
The third to be exact
It rips my heart apart
But i know you will be back

*i suck at writing without thinking it over but i had to get this down because this is the happiest Ive been in a while :)

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  • 13 years ago

    by HisBlueEyedAngel

    Awww this one makes me wanna cry...I know how you felt in this one...missing your love so much...it is the best feeling to see them again. Your and amazing writer...I give you a 5

  • 14 years ago

    by ASHLEY NiCOLE

    Sweetie i know just how you feel!!

    weeks away suck!! but in the end when you see him it is the greatest feeling in the world

  • 14 years ago

    by Saving Grace

    Short and sweet. It was so simply written, and yet so much love has been clearly poured into this poem. I enjoyed the read. =] Keep it up. 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by ilikepurple222

    Sweet :) a few spelling errors though so you might want to check those over though. but overall, good. :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Sumit Ojha

    Short and awesome work... And its full with love.
    Keep up this good work 5/5

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