I hate you, I pinky promise I do.

by Brittany   Dec 25, 2009


I hate you, I pinky promise I do.
If there was a mistake Ive ever made it is being with you.
I used to be sweet and now Ive got bitter.
Like a rose in the winter, Ive started to wither.

Every one of my breaths is forced.
As I sit and sulk with remorse.
Your always so rude,
and put me in a sour mood.
We always argue now and fight too
We only hang out when its conveniant for you

I hate you, I pinky promise I do.
You make it where I cant think, Im so confused.
I hate you because I love you too Damn much.
But were not working and I'm getting that hunch.
At least I hate passion for you no matter what..
Is hate and love so different at times?
Is your heart really so different than mine?
If so why dont you always treat me right..
If you dont I will leave ,I just might.

Every movement is now not as swift.
Each one of my heart beats is a gift..
I feel like my hearts dieing
with every tear i have been crying
But i now know thats not true like then
cause my hearts starting to mend
And im stronger every step you take to go
i smile to myself cause i just thought you should know

I hate you, I pinky promise I do.
you make me feel so used
once you leave ill hide my self away
So another man just like you wont come and steal it as they may

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 14 years ago

    by Lori

    Guys suck! They are so stupid and we never understand why. Haha guys really are from a different planet!

    I really loved this poem. It was something all us girls could relate to. Also, it showed anger. When you know you have a good poem, is when you get your emotion out to the reader clearly. You are upset, angry, and quite frankly pissed. Ha, I like it.

    Again, there were some spots here and there that the flow was a tad off...but overall, it was a great and unique poem that is something to give the reader to think about and enjoy.

    I love the whole "I hate you, I pinky promise I do."

    That was cute. Haha it was somewhat a comedic relief through all the tears and sadness.

    Again, very lovely poem. I'm very fond of it and I hope you continue to write!

    5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Daniel Rutter

    Very moving. You've described the constant questions floating around in anyone's head when their relationship is... failing.

    Voted 5/5, and you're now one of my favorites :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Jess

    This is a reallly good poem! I reallly really like it! im gonna put you as one of my favorite writers!!

    You should coment my 3 most recent poems!
    I would appriciate itt!

    5/5 :))
    --jesss.

Read All Comments (3)

More Poems By Brittany