An excellent write...Love can be so fragile it seems, you express very well the fear that we can all feel at times. A wonderful job!

That was really sad. I loved it more than alot. I expected to read your poem like it wasn't going to do anything for me. When I opened it. It broke my heart. I hate love but unfortunately everyones going to love at least once in their lives. Good job, I like how it didn't rhyme. xx BIG SMILE FOR YOU. :D

Excellent.

It all made perfect sense
in my eyes.

I feel like I could understand what
you were writing about.

Great job
5/5

I really thought your ending was very powerful & extremely well written. It was interesting to see a quote from a famous person inserted into your poem which triggered more thoughts. Nicely done. :]

Good poem. Really sad, but I can totally relate.

Perfectly written. You did a very good job with the ending. It is what I loved most. Also, the fact that you incorporated words from William S. makes it even more wonderful. Perfection. 5/5

While I believe this is a wonderful write, I can't relate to the ENTIRE poem. Parts of it leave me prejudiced because I simply don't understand love. The flow was wonderful, all the words were there, but my heart wasn't.

Well this one definitely didn't flow like other poems do, but i like that about it. it's more dialouge, almost, than a poem.
"When most people would carefully draw back, I'm quickly racing forward with my flaw of impatience at my side" -this is my favorite part, showing how stubborn love can be. you did a good job with this one

I have always been afraid of change, and it is for good reason, for if you read my poems u will see how i dont really change. i express what is real. and i try and change very little unless need be. 5/5. the only problem is that it was very long, but i love long poems, and u r gonna people who weill see it, then turn away.

I thought overall it was really great. I loved the idea of the poem and i thought your wording was really well throughout. I didnt think that it didnt flow that well and the way you set up the stanzas was really odd and made it harder to read.

"with my flaw of impatience at my side"

^^^ this was the best line out of the entire poem, well done. Also the first before last stanza was amazing and it really had a great impact on the reader. A well deserved 5/5

There is something about this poem that reflects the deep nature of the author I thought the quote was appropriate in the open exploration of the power of love. Overall your personal discoveries are reflected so well in this poem

I really loved it, it had a quick transistion but you managed to keep the flow. 5/5 it was a very good poem :]

This was really well done. I think this is the best I've read from you so far. Your emotions are very powerful and can be felt by the reader htoughout the entire piece. You have a great talent hun, keep writing. Nik

Some very powerful lines in here. The power behing the write seems to come out at you in waves. I couldn't see everything(because of different experiences and observations), but what I could see, I could feel as well. Very well written.

Fantastic Poem. I really loved it. and the Shakespeare Quote I love it. Like how it finishes with change. Everything in this world ends with change

Such a powerful piece, I especially like how you Incorporated some of Shakespeare into it.

my favorite two lines

Long ago I asked for patience,
but you quickly grew impatient.

sounds like you need a big dose of TIME,
as time is the best healer of these wounds.

If you'd like to read another of my poems
I have one for ya, it little bit of a "pic me up"
read my poem called 'Beautiful taint.
of course in doing so Ill come back for another of yours.