Awe.
very well written i love the ending :] 5/5

Well I like how you compose this poem. There seems to be lots of different ways for us to heal our sorrow. Though some might not work for us, we tend to seek other alternative ways of healing our sorrow. I like the questions that you asked at the second line of each stanza and answering on the 3rd and 4th line of each stanza. I just love how you end the poem. Sometimes, all we need to do is live our lives and enjoy the surprises in life that awaits us.I really enjoyed reading this poem. Excellent work.Keep it up;)

I overly enjoyed this write..I was smiling because actually I was answering yes to most of the questions you asked. I think its totally up the person. When people are feeling pain and there is nothing but tears, they have to have an open mind as to how to heal it. Liquor, turqouise waters, it can all work if your up to letting it help you truly get better...
I loved this write! LOVED it!.

So many unanswer questions . your style
is that of a true poet. you could proably
make a horror story sound romantic.
excellent piece. if this was a meal I'vd say
I had lobster . 5/5

An intriguing piece!!! LOvely to read!!!
God bless!!!

-Pink Butterfly-

Nice Write!!!