My Poem To yOu

by tears i cry   Jan 14, 2010

I open my heart to you
i give you my all
i give you my heart
i give you my soul

the touch of your lips
sends shivers down my spine
at time its hard to believe
that you are really mine

ive never felt like this before
so much so soon
you make me so happy
morning night and noon

yes were gonna fight sometimes
but we will always make it through
i know this because
deep in my heart i will always love you


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  • 9 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    Your poem was nice, the flow was good... but try rhyming the words, or using more imagination to describe what ur feeling...
    it sounded more like you were talking to someone, (which is another good way to write a poem) but try embracing ur imagination more...

    keep up the good work