Nitin
Congrats on the club win :) Also for being Poet of the Year in Phoenix Rising
This is a very sad yet hopeful piece. Full of awesome imagery and word choices.

Touch me again in the morning
When sun is shining like a new bride
Kiss my forehead with your first ray
And for eternity be my soul's guide

I love how this turned around with yuo finding a lasting love. This last stanza just warms the heart.
Excellent job!
Love Cindy

Each time I read it, it gets more and more
beautiful. A touchig poem with a soft tone of
love..very nice!

Very nice and congrats on the win.

A sad but beautiful & piece that ended on a positive , hopeful note . absolutely stunning are your words Nitin, I thought you did a fantastic job.. congrats on your win, it was veeery well deserved!

Beautiful. A very beautiful write. I read it twice, and it just got better. Excellent.

Beautiful write nitin. great flow and rhyme. 5/5 from me...all the best wishes ben thompson

Walking with pockets full of stones

This is best line. good poem.
Thanx for again inspiring me agian subit my poems in this club.

MY ENGLISH IS NOT AS SUCH GOOD. i CAN WRITE IN HINDI VERY WELL AND PLAY ALSO WITH WORDS IN HINDI.

THANX I WILL TRY TO SUBMIT HERE SOMETHINK GOOD.

Great poem of you.5/5 from me!