"Tell me I mean something because right now I don't feel real" these are classic opening lines for a great poem. and i also really like "I want to love but love always falls apart" overall the flow is nice, you did a great job writing it.

Quite sad , but the flow is very good and soothing. ..keep it coming :P

I think most people love sleeping just so they can escape reality even if just for a few ours. I felt that way until I found somebody who made my reality better than my dreams. I definately agree with you that people throw words around and no matter what in my eyes words are meaningless I need you to prove you love me in other ways. Very relatable poem for most people who have experienced love loss, you wonder why you can't let go of somebody who continues to hurt you. Excellent work nice job as always 5/5 :)

The last stanza I felt like I could connect & as well as others I'm sure to a lot. That feeling of waking up after a beautiful dream and being hit with reality so quickly realizing it never happened-hate that it's so frustrating! It may make one feel like they are back to the depressing feeling impossible to erase.

Interesting write Nik, I enjoyed the read even though it was sad. Keep up the excellent work.

Peace, Joe

Ask me why I think of him so much
when he has probably forgotten my name.

every powerful stuff this. Even though I a male, i relate to this quote. i like this poem, every much, and would hate it not to see a five out of five from me

I think this was a pretty good poem but it feels a little..lost..but I suppouse it supposed to as the subject seems confused as well. I really enjoyed this line:
"But you keep pouring salt in my wounds
as I try to crawl my way out."

Beautiful imagry and you can feel the pain.
Good job!

Amazing. i know the feeling. I think it's a good subject for people to relate to. it flowed well. 5/5
Rachel

I liked the poem for all it was sad, I think the sad poems are often the best because most of the time they contain the most emotion. I thought the flow in the poem was pretty good, and the rhymes matched up pretty well too, though I wasn't sure about real and kill, but overall it was a good poem. I could relate to a lot of what the poem was saying especially with the second to last stanza, but My favorite lines from the poem were actually these:
"Wishing this was all pretend like the beating of my heart
I want to love but love always falls apart."

I liked them because of how you described the beating of your heart as pretendm, like you're not sure it's there anymore because of all of this and hurting. Overall you did a good job on the poem. 5/5

Emotional piece. Very sad and honest. But beautifully written eh. This deserves a 5 all the way around (I dont understand how it has a 4.7 right now to be honest). But, keep up the amazing writes Nik.

-KJ

This was a very strong poem. I liked it all the way through.
The imagary methods you used were classic and known ones. The rhymes made the flow go perfectly.
The line: "I want to love but love always falls apart." is a very strong one, and now more than ever I feel attached to it.
You explained your point here very clearly, about a relationship meant to be broekn... So every day is like hell. I don't think there's anything here to fix. Nice work 5/5

I liked the 4/2 scheme and it was an easy read, didn't feel forced or clunky. Nice job :)