Natures Expressions (Butterfly Oddquain)

by Italian Stallion   Jan 26, 2010


Love:
A beauty,
forever unleashed...
deep within the heart of gold.
Blithe -
wind, blows amidst her chic dress,
revealing beauty
to the eyes:
Love!

© Copyright 2010 By: Italian Stallion

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Oddquain butterflies - a "merged mirror oddquain" where the two stanzas of a mirror oddquain are merged together, one of the middle 1 syllable lines is dropped, resulting in one nine line stanza of the form 1-3-5-7-1-7-5-3-1. Please note that a oddquain butterfly is not a "oddquain" because it doesn't have five lines, but it is a "butterfly" made up of two oddquains that were merged together into one poem."
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  • 15 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    Wonderful..:) Great job on the form Joe... I loved it. Bravo!

  • 15 years ago

    by Cindy

    Nice job on this form Joe. Beautifulk words of love and nature.
    Good job!
    Take Care
    Cindy

  • 15 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    I had lots of fun using this form and it's nice to see others try it. Job well done Joe :) Nik

  • 15 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    A beautiful write here, nice to see you try this form.

  • 15 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Very nice Joe. Love is a beauty and nature as well. Well done.

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