No Sunshine Breaks

by Rachel RTVW   Jan 27, 2010


Subconscious digs so deep
Dreams disturb much needed sleep
Disguised a familiar silhouette
Vivid so one may not forget

Haunted soul torments the mind
Sense of security, hard to find
Unfathomable, the depths of pain
No sunshine breaks torrential rain

Purpose sought but tis unknown
Surrounded by people yet still alone
Leave the past, make a new start
Sorrow has engraved this heart

Moving on don't look back
Sunny skies dressed in black
Try to keep my head held high
But everyday I wonder why
No sunshine breaks........

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  • 15 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Thank you for your comments.

    Lu, yes you are right, that was a typo. Thanks:)

  • 15 years ago

    by Lu

    Moving on don't look back
    Sunny skies dressed in black
    Try to keep my held held high
    But everyday I wonder why
    No sunshine breaks........
    ^^^
    Rachel your 2 beginning lines stand out and make the reader feel your words deeply.
    3rd line I think you mean "head held high"

    This piece is so touching Rachel. I hope your sunshine comes soon my friend ~hugs~

  • 15 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    Excellent job with this piece truly great 5/5

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