Comments : Silence of a dying senses

  • 14 years ago

    by Kianna

    Very good i like it :)
    5/5
    KiKi

  • 14 years ago

    by Steady Stereotype

    This poem seems to be like, almost a speech. I can imagine a booming voice reciting each word clearly. Like a powerful, piece a speech even?

    This was well written, a free verse that didn't drive me insane.

    "looking for hope in your eyes
    in the name of MUST i fight"
    ^I loved these two lines. A very interesting and intriguing play of words in the second line. "I must fight" "In the name of MUST I fight." A great sense of originality.

    Great Job. I really liked this write, hope to see more in the future. (:

  • 12 years ago

    by mira

    Nice work i like the words

  • 12 years ago

    by Siham

    You left me speechless .....
    excellent 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Marcy Lewis

    Every word brought the insanity closer
    when silence is the death it self

    ^that line was absolutely wonderful. I got goosebumps while reading this. marvelous.

  • 9 years ago

    by christian

    I was sucked in with the silent power of emotions this poem held itself especially the ending " every word brought the insanity closer when silence is the death it self" amazing

  • 9 years ago

    by Dancing Rivers

    Chilling, haunting and beautiful, my favourite from you that I've read so far :-)