Well ladies, I think you both captured very well how losing a relationship can send you into the deepest abyss..

Skating along the cliff of insanity...
my heart whispers I miss you

^^
Words that are true for those who really love with all their heart, missing that certain someone can really drive you to the verge of insanity.

Delicate threads of hope aspire-
tethered from the heart,
kissed by possibilities, fired
by promises of yesterday

^^
Sometimes things do work out the second time around, but often we stumble upon the same problems that made us break up the first time around...It can be really difficult to decide whether to move on or to give love one more try. This is true for people all ages and all races..it is universal.

Good work, seamless collab:)

God bless,

5/5 Ingrid

Butterflies have temporarily ceased-

*This line made me sad :( I think butterflies are some of the most beautiful creatures on the planet and if they didn't exist anymore I'd be sad.*

due to your absence.
they no longer titillate desires...

*Love the wored "titillate" Don't think I've seen that one before.*

their wings immobilized by loneliness.

*Aww this part reminds me of a bird in a cage with little room to move. Very sad but your wording is lovely*

Air filled with toxic abandon-

*I'd change "abandon" to "abandoned" Seems like it would flow better to me*

emotions that once ran blissful
Disabled: thick with cravings..
that gave me flight

*This part was flawless! Loved the way the words flowed into each other :) *

Passion, need, intensify solitude-
as lachrymose eyes speak I love you.

*Lachrymose is like one of my favorite words! Very sad lines but so true for some people. I like how simple your emotions are, I know a lot of people can relate.*

Skating along the cliff of insanity...
my heart whispers I miss you.

*Wow..that's all I can say about those two lines, just wow*

Delicate threads of hope aspire-
tethered from the heart,
kissed by possibilities, fired
by promises of yesterday

*Such a sad piece ladies but so well done. You two wrote this amazingly and I loved reading it. Very powerful words. Keep it up :) Nik*

Nice collab. The first two lines sound just a little awkward but all in all the message comes through, longing for a love that is not be be. Well done.

I love this. "Butterflies have temporarily ceased-
due to your absence.
they no longer titillate desires...
their wings immobilized by loneliness."
great job :)

‘Butterflies have temporarily ceased-‘

I like the usage of words here, to see the colors of
life which freely roam just suddenly stop beautiful line.

`emotions that once ran blissful
Disabled: thick with cravings..
that gave me flight’

This is another one I like the description about emotion is
very well penned.

A good job done by you ladies!

Beautiful

Delicate threads of hope aspire-
tethered from the heart,
kissed by possibilities, fired
by promises of yesterday

Beautiful lines