It's crazy how we can be attracted to so many people but theres really only one person who makes us feel real and alive. I thought I knew what love was until I met my fiancee and it was a totally different experience and something I can't live without now. I'm very glad you have this and it sounds like you love all the right things. Some say the little things don't matter but there really most important because they happen everyday. Excellent work with this piece it was very real. 5/5

I must say that each line flowed so well that the unforced rhyme was a bonus in this sensual and romantic poem
I woundn't change a thing
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Awww this was just precious! i absolutely loved this :) Karl said it best. Attraction to anyone is possible, but it takes one special person to make us feel incredibly real, comfortable, and alive. You're poetry is always cute and amazing. Whoever it's written to, well she's one lucky lady.
I run out of words when commenting your work. I love every piece!
Great job as always
Chelsey

Great poem!
there' s nothing about you from your fingers to your toes that doesn't own my heart..I LOVE this line
i also like the chocolate eyes and the name slipping past the lips
5/5 =D

Good poem. it makes me smile with the words and descriptions you used. great job :)

Love the beauty this piece holds K.J ...

What really caught my eyes is your beginning line in the first 5 stanzas.

"I love the way you are"
^^^
Without wanting to change, re-arrange or fix anything about her ... now that is what love truly is. Beautiful !!!!!

...that there's nothing about you
from your fingers to your toes
that doesn't own my heart
because you are everything I love
^^^
Lovely ending !

Thanks for sharing this beautiful piece K.J, very much enjoyed the read. ~hugs~

Really good write. I loved how your details made me feel like I was there with you. I flow was good and your rhyming was not forced like some peoples writing is. My only suggestion would be to capitalize the first letter when you start on a new line, it would make your work look neater. I really like this poem 5/5 :D

This is a very good poem, youve written it really well and your chioce of wording suited the style of the overall piece! Also the flow worked quite nicely making this poem a very enjoyable read as the lines ran nicely into each other! Great work =]