Tears

by Tori Hicks   Feb 18, 2010


Falling fiercely from my eyes,
The tears won't stop.
I can tell without you saying it
This is the end.
I can't tell where we went wrong
Or what I should do.
But I know you're moving on
And maybe I could, too.
I remember when I used to dream of you
But now those days are gone.
Fires fill my dreams
Radiating through my memory.
Like rain from a war-torn sky
I feel my cheeks become drenched.
I don't know what to say anymore
But I can't let you go.
When I look at you, I know you love me,
But can love keep you here?
Can feelings like ours keep us together
Like glue upon our hearts?
Or it is time for me
To just let go?

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  • 13 years ago

    by Rihanna

    Wow.. Nicky written
    I loved it Hun <<3

    100/100 from me darl :))

  • 15 years ago

    by Sunshine

    U had realy some strong lines over here.. i lovew this poem more than the ones ive read...was kinda DEEPER with images.

    and for fact...things that are meant to happen..happen even wen we dnt like it.. is it time to let go ? there is never the right time :)

    there is only the its wise to :)

    loved ur poems
    5.5

  • 15 years ago

    by Kuro

    Nice word choice.

    Radiating through my memory.
    Like rain from a war-torn sky

    ^this was my favorite part.

    keep writing and thanks for sharing (and for the comment)
    ~Kuro

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