Suspended (Haiku)

by Rachel RTVW   Feb 23, 2010


Suspended in time
The frozen crystals shimmer
Waterfall silenced

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  • 13 years ago

    by Lana

    This was oustanding. The imagery is so beautiful and I do love the last line

    Waterfall silenced

    While it is nice to hear the sound of a waterfall it must be spectacular to see it suspended in silent. Loved it!

  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Such a lovely Haiku you have penned! I like
    this description very much:

    suspended in time
    frozen crystal shimmer!

    Well done with this form :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    I almost wish I could have seen this beautiful scene, a frozen waterfall.. I can only imagine how stunning it is. Loved this so very much, awesome job!

  • 14 years ago

    by Cindy

    Rachel
    This is so beautiful. I have a hard time with the Haiku. You took me back in time allowing me to once again see something I can no longer enjoy. I have so many memories of Cascade park.
    Excellent job!
    Love you
    Aunt Cindy

  • 14 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    You are right dear:) I was typing too fast lol! And the poem was inspired by the frozen waterfall near my house:) I thought that too about the title but I couldn't think of another appropriate one that didn't give away the piece.....