Nothing that I would ever what to forget
^^ I think you meant to write 'want' instead of 'what'??
There were also a few other spelling/grammar mistakes; but I must say that the honesty and emotion displayed into this poem was great. Also, you did a wonderful job with the rhyme scheme (it didnt seem forced at all; although at some points it felt as if you were repeating yourself a bit). But overall, I would give this a 5. I am sure that a lot can relate.
I know how bad it hurts to remember a love you don't have anymore but the truth is fighting through it will make you a much stronger person. We all know the risk of love before we pursue it but we can't seem to live without it so the risk is worth the reward. Good job 5/5
Well first off I think you need a little more structure in your stanzas. I thought the syllabol count was a little off. I also think you can be more descriptive emotionally, like can you use other words beside like sad and things like that. Overall the nice job. 3.5/5