Comments : To The One Who Let Me Go*

  • 10 years ago

    by KJ

    Nothing that I would ever what to forget
    ^^ I think you meant to write 'want' instead of 'what'??

    There were also a few other spelling/grammar mistakes; but I must say that the honesty and emotion displayed into this poem was great. Also, you did a wonderful job with the rhyme scheme (it didnt seem forced at all; although at some points it felt as if you were repeating yourself a bit). But overall, I would give this a 5. I am sure that a lot can relate.

    -KJ

  • 10 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    I know how bad it hurts to remember a love you don't have anymore but the truth is fighting through it will make you a much stronger person. We all know the risk of love before we pursue it but we can't seem to live without it so the risk is worth the reward. Good job 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Su

    Love it!

  • 10 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Very lyrical and heartfelt all at the same time. The use of comtempary language gave it a down to earth flavor. Overall I enjoyed reading this well written poem

  • 10 years ago

    by ilikepurple222

    This was really sad and heartfelt. it's upsetting to know that things don't always work out the way you wish deep down in your heart they would. keep it up :)

  • 10 years ago

    by Kaila

    Well first off I think you need a little more structure in your stanzas. I thought the syllabol count was a little off. I also think you can be more descriptive emotionally, like can you use other words beside like sad and things like that. Overall the nice job. 3.5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Cale

    This is another great poem!! You have some amazing talent!! Keep up the great work!!!

  • 10 years ago

    by Cale

    This is another great poem!! You have some amazing talent!! Keep up the great work!!!

  • 10 years ago

    by DirgeVenustas

    Good and sad, loved it