Comments : Poetise Thoughts

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Very nice, the message of the poet awakening again comes through with your words. Well done.

  • 14 years ago

    by Cindy

    Sourav
    How I have missed reading your verses. Welcome back :) What a wonderful piece you have returned with. Beautiful imagery.

    All the earth and air, beauty so profound
    Awaken the soul of a poet hidden in deep
    Now I can feel the aura, hear the sound
    My spirit awakens from the defiant sleep.

    I love your ending. Very inspiring.
    Great job!
    Take Care
    Cindy

  • 14 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    All the earth and air, beauty so profound
    Awaken the soul of a poet hidden in deep
    Now I can feel the aura, hear the sound
    My spirit awakens from the defiant sleep.

    ^^ with such beauty around indeed our souls will awaken... loved the beautiful imagery here...
    well penned.

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    I loved the imagery in this & the unique descriptions - very unique descriptions, some I've never heard. Very nice!!

  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Green grass, covered by morning dew
    Trees dance in tune of naughty breeze
    A smiling rose does all delight renew
    Quiet moist earth is at absolute ease

    This is such a beautiful picture of nature you
    have painted with words, it makes the heart
    smile..a warm and pleasurable read :)

  • 13 years ago

    by DreamingOutLoud

    This poem is a-mazing ! it's a combination of nature, love and freedom - awakening ! LOVELY!

  • 13 years ago

    by DreamingOutLoud

    This poem is a-mazing ! it's a combination of nature, love and freedom - awakening ! LOVELY!