Comments : Tortured Soul

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Good job with the image contest. Your words bring the image to life. Well done.

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Your words really capture the true image you are basing this poem off of. you did a very nice job with this, great job :]

  • 14 years ago

    by Countess of Monte Cristo

    The imagery here is stunning, dear lady.

    A 5 for me indeed...

  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Thunder roars "Come now love"
    Letting go jagged rocks wait
    Falling, shattered, broken, lifeless
    Watery tomb now her fate

    So sad and the image here is so very vivid!
    Well done with the challenge :)

  • 14 years ago

    by anand singh

    The message portrayed is quite vivd and the image is indeed stunning.
    Though sad, it was beautifully penned.
    Paul...

  • 14 years ago

    by Kuro

    I read your poem before looking at the picture. i had this image with my mind's eye. but it was more of an image. you gave it an emotion with ominous intent.

    then i looked at the picture. aside from being a little bit higher, it was dead on accurate.

    very nice job. 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Yakari Gabriel

    I love this..
    very strong emotions
    beautiful sad write,well done (:

  • 13 years ago

    by Andrew

    Beautiful