Comments : Heartbroken

  • 11 years ago

    by Jeff

    Good poem.. like the flow.. cheer up girl!

  • 9 years ago

    by mira

    Wooooooooooooooow
    ijust love this one it makes me crying
    you just use the right words in the right place to discribe the right situation and the true feelings
    i love it bravo

  • 9 years ago

    by FaithfulDreamer

    This is the story of my life and i was crying the whole time i was reading it. Its amazing I love it

  • 9 years ago

    by Anonymous

    Thank you all for your comments. I'm glad to know that I can bring out the emotional side in some that can honestly relate. :) I wrote this poem about the most wonderful guy I met and because of a situation we parted our ways. I guess it's true when you say to let something you love go and if it comes back it's yours because he came back and now we're together for a year and a half! He's the most amazing guy on earth!! He is my soulmate! I'm in love!!! :)

  • 9 years ago

    by Paul Gondwe

    The introduction was good, the ending was great..love your unique style