This was a excellent poem and having it in the from of a ghazal made it that much better. The meter was good as well as the flow and from what I have seen I believe you have a lot of talent keep writing.

Sylvia I liked this form, interesting. You did an excellent job with it, keep introducing these lovely forms. They are a joy to read.

Sylvia
Now this is a form I always wanted to try. It seems like it is very difficult. You made it look so simple.
Good job
Take care
Love Cindy

I really like this form and you have done well
using it..thanks for introducing another new
form :)

A very interesting form/style. i liked the ending word for every other line ending in "Sanity." as sanity can be describes several different ways by several different people.

very interesting indeed. thanks for sharing
~Kuro