Comments : Forgotten Memories

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Memories of childhood at times does make us want time to slow down or stop when life gets confusing and let us enjoy them and smile again. Well done.

  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Certain things in life brings back memories &
    until then we don't realize how much we have
    missed out on life..liked it :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Jad

    As said above memories we wish we could slow down and keep. This was a nicely penned poem and I enjoyed reading it. :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    You penned a unique and relatable piece for us to enjoy. Life does sometimes reach this point where we just wish it would slow down & we could re-experience those wonderful memories we have of the past. Nicely done,

  • 14 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    *Bows* You rule. I swear every piece I read gets more and more epicer lol if that's a word. You have such an awesomess about your poems that I look for when I read them. I just loved this one, brilliant :] NiK

  • 14 years ago

    by NotCryingForHelp

    Awesome :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Cindy

    Raj
    What a beautiful poem.

    Faded are the frocks with frill,
    Where did I lost my daffodils?
    Time, please stop for a while?
    I just remembered how to smile.

    Childhood passes us by so quickly. One day we turn around and it is gone. Thankfully we have all our treasured memories to help us smile again when things get hard.
    Excellent job!
    Love Cindy